Nice job Danielle. Your pitch was great and everything you said seemed well rehearsed and clearly understood. Your setting and attire were great as well and it was not too long and dragging. I would have liked a little more about the spa as well as maybe what are the benefits of it, but all in all I think it was great especially for the 1st one. I'm sure you'll kill the next one. Keep it up!
Hi Danielle, Great job on your elevator pitch! You have a great idea and I would love to send my dog to a place like that. To improve your pitch, increased movement and less stiff body movement would be beneficial. When you are trying to sell a product, it's important to engage and captivate the audience.
Nice job Danielle. Your pitch was great and everything you said seemed well rehearsed and clearly understood. Your setting and attire were great as well and it was not too long and dragging. I would have liked a little more about the spa as well as maybe what are the benefits of it, but all in all I think it was great especially for the 1st one. I'm sure you'll kill the next one. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Danielle,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! You have a great idea and I would love to send my dog to a place like that. To improve your pitch, increased movement and less stiff body movement would be beneficial. When you are trying to sell a product, it's important to engage and captivate the audience.