Feedback: I received more feedback on Pitch No.2. Again the feedback was all positive with one suggestion. The suggestion was to related to my targeted market more so that is what I did in the beginning of the video.
I feel Pitch No.3 was better than the others. I did feel more confident as the pitch was pretty much memorized at this point and I was comfortable in front of the camera.
Danielle,
ReplyDeleteElevator pitch number three was my best pitch as well due to the practice and edits we've been able to make over the last month or so based off the feedback we have received. Feeling comfortable in front of the camera is actually a big part of it and once we are comfortable with that, the rest seemed to fall into place. Addressing your target market more thoroughly helped the pitch become more powerful and focus in on who you are directly selling to. Your pitch is solid and compelling. Nice work!
Danielle,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this elevator pitch. Through this class, i feel like I can now more confidently pitch something to someone, whether it be important or just something in my personal life. I feel like my opinions and points of views mean more now that I can public speak better.
Danielle,
ReplyDeleteFor me, I feel that my third elevator pitch video was by the best one since we started doing these a few weeks ago. I think with the more times I have performed my elevator pitch the more comfortable I became. Not only with the dialogue but also with performing it in one take on camera. I remember there would be times when I would get stumbled on my words and would need to do another take. It felt like this last time I was by far the most polished. I though your elevator pitch was well done. It shows how much better your pitch has come since the first time I watched this pitch before.